2.23.2010

rejected poetry

please read this
thank you.

10 comments:

Olivia said...

"because i don’t want to look like the coneheads"
^^^^^^^^^^^
favorite line
the rest was sexy and hilarious
IDK HOW YOUDOIT :/

rollerfink said...

i wouldn't reject that poem

wiredwriter said...

these lines made me grin widely:

and you will die a little
and then i will let you breathe again

I would never reject you.

DJ Berndt said...

Nice work, Ana. You are brilliant.

Cami said...

Cherry.

~otto~ said...

I just died a little

"machur"

Radish King said...

Your work is so original and feminist and ferocious. Please don't listen to anything they tell you in school.
love,
Rebecca

brittany wallace said...

i wholeheartedly agree with rebecca

Ben Brooks said...

'arousing'
'10 out of 10'
'I was gripped'
'nice work'

ryan manning said...

every time you write a poem an angel masturbates